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Title: I need some advice! -Please? :)-
Post by: FrenchToastAwsome on January 15, 2012, 10:42:09 pm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9pWxb2uc1FM&

Ok, so I’ve been working on this for the past day now, and I REALLY would appreciate critique on this. I’m trying to audition for ADS [AvatarDokyStudios], but I really don’t think I’m good enough. .____.

People on YT have already said to add coloring to the video, and I eventually will, but if anyone else can provide advice, I would really appreciate it! *O*

Title: Re: I need some advice! -Please? :)-
Post by: CartoonInvasions on January 16, 2012, 04:21:54 pm

i'd say add some lyrics just a few of them and a small texture, ever so slightly but everything else is good

Title: Re: I need some advice! -Please? :)-
Post by: hydrazoite on January 16, 2012, 05:44:20 pm

Yeah, I agree with the lyrics idea, perhaps key words off to the side?
And maybe a little bit more pan/zoom?

Title: Re: I need some advice! -Please? :)-
Post by: FrenchToastAwsome on January 17, 2012, 01:28:57 am

Ahh, Thank you both so much! The lyrics idea is actually really good, but I'm not really one to put them in. I'll experiment though!

Kai - More pan and crop sounds ok! I already put subtle zoom for flow, but I'll try! Thank you! :)