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Critique would REALLY be appreciated for this!
hydrazoite:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R3LYvURweWQ
See warning in the video, I really mean it. Also HD is a must, sorry to press this, but otherwise the quality is just not worth it. Also, if it starts skipping and lagging, please restart, or pause and allow it to catch up to itself. It seems to be a little temperamental.
Besides that, I would really like you amazing editors to critique this. It's for a project, a huge project.
It's a group project. Each group chose a charity and were told to create a presentation based upon that charity. Each of the groups would compete against each other to see which presentation was the best in the class. The finalists will then go on to "battle" the other finalists from the other classes in my grade.
The winner gets 5000 dollars for their charity. Yes, $5000.
So this is a pretty big deal. And the project required a artistic component. So I did a video.
My charity runs a online anon forum, and counselling to help people deal with all kind of issues, like the ones in the video, and I thought this would be the intro to our presentation.
And I would REALLY appreciate critique, what you liked, what you didn't like, if there is anything I should add, take away, or change?
It would be REALLY appreciated! :D
Also, if you think this is too strong to show to my class (grade11), please let me know!
ApocryphalReality:
...wow. This was amazing! It totally got the message across, and was presented in such an interesting way. Reminds me of the F*in Perfect music video actually. But this video puts the fact out there that people commit suicide because of so many reasons, a lot of them having to do with their peers. I wouldn't change this at all. Amazing job well done. :)
hydrazoite:
Thank you!
FrenchToastAwsome:
I really think I received the message I was supposed to here.
I think MAYBe one thing you could change is the length of the clips just a TINY bit. There were some clips where it was more of a... Different? Shot, and I couldn't tell right away what it was about, but it moved too fast so I couldn't tell. That's just a MAYBE though. This is excellent. I would keep it just the way it is.
And maybe you should keep the aspect ratio of the video the same for the whole video, or consistent parts of it if the "movie" effect is needed. :)
hydrazoite:
Okay, thanks for the critique!
Yeah, I totally forgot that some were full screen and some were widescreen XD I'm definitely going to be fixing that!
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