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I need some advice! -Please? :)-
« on: January 15, 2012, 10:42:09 pm »
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9pWxb2uc1FM&

Ok, so Iíve been working on this for the past day now, and I REALLY would appreciate critique on this. Iím trying to audition for ADS [AvatarDokyStudios], but I really donít think Iím good enough. .____.

People on YT have already said to add coloring to the video, and I eventually will, but if anyone else can provide advice, I would really appreciate it! *O*

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Re: I need some advice! -Please? :)-
« Reply #1 on: January 16, 2012, 04:21:54 pm »
i'd say add some lyrics just a few of them and a small texture, ever so slightly but everything else is good

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Re: I need some advice! -Please? :)-
« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2012, 05:44:20 pm »
Yeah, I agree with the lyrics idea, perhaps key words off to the side?
And maybe a little bit more pan/zoom?

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Re: I need some advice! -Please? :)-
« Reply #3 on: January 17, 2012, 01:28:57 am »
Ahh, Thank you both so much! The lyrics idea is actually really good, but I'm not really one to put them in. I'll experiment though!

Kai - More pan and crop sounds ok! I already put subtle zoom for flow, but I'll try! Thank you! :)